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« Reply #600 on: July 26, 2011, 09:27:54 pm »

Buat dennisgon di Giant Killing;
ada setidaknya 5 typo dan 3 masalah tanda baca + huruf kapital, belum lagi soal spasi kata

intinya: berantakan.
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« Reply #601 on: July 27, 2011, 06:55:23 pm »

Buat Katsu di Durarara:
Kenapa pakai nama model Jepang? Apa nggak sebaiknya pakai nama yang ada di buku Elex? :/
(Jepang: Nama Keluarga + Nama Kecil, Elex: Nama Kecil + Nama Keluarga)
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« Reply #602 on: July 28, 2011, 09:21:09 pm »

Buat dennisgon di Giant Killing;
ada setidaknya 5 typo dan 3 masalah tanda baca + huruf kapital, belum lagi soal spasi kata

intinya: berantakan.
yah sayang uda kelewat baru bisa buka sekarang
thanks yah koreksinya
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